To Whom This May Concern,
I am writing to you as I would like your permission to film my school music video on your premises, on the dates provided below;
1st June 2014
2nd June 2014
3rd June 2014
I hope that this is possible as it would be very much appreciated as we feel that your premises are an ideal place to film.
Olivia Griffiths, Luke Biley and James Peagam